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YSSWG- Enter Kiryu and Aki 027 by Crystal-Dream YSSWG- Enter Kiryu and Aki 027 by Crystal-Dream
I am soo late again... I haven't been working much on any comic for that matter, now with protocols in animal physiology to write as well as another protocol for when we went out to check out plants and find out into which family they belong. I loved the trip to the woods though, it has an old feeling of class and classmates, the way me and my fellow students walked there with our professor. :)

Okay, back to the page.
I am not quite satisfied with the colouration this time, maybe it is because I use different colours for the shading now instead of the usual grey colour that I used in all the pages before.
Once again, we see the conclusion of when Zappa tried to get to live with Yubel and Juudai. Of course with her openly jumping Juudai Yubel would not be too happy, but Zappa also would not back off.
Looks like a fight between angel and demoness. :XD:
And Juudai tries to calm down everyone while eating some shrimp. He still loves them very much as his favourite food.


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Zappa is an OC of :iconlittlegah:
Any ideas for people who want to join Yubel and Juudai? I am still open. Though, I am slowly thinking of simply just going on with the story, and make just some side stories of who may have been there before, trying to apply for a place with Yubel and Juudai.
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Sakura969 Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2011  Student
Wilkommen im Klub
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Bob-owe Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2011
I think the coloring is just fine!
the only problem I see is that panel positioning... it's a bit confusing; i don't know which panel I should read before which other one.
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Crystal-Dream Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2011  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
maybe the arrows that indicate it seem to go under in the colouring...
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Bob-owe Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2011
I see one arrow, but that's it.
you can't rely solely on arrows, however! the key to making great comics is knowing how to position things so that the flow of the reader's eye and the direction you want to take them are all one in the same. using arrows should only be a last-resort.
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Crystal-Dream Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2011  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Darn, I should make them more visible if that's the case.
You are right about the panels of course. But lately I have been feeling limitated in drawing comics by always having my panels to be the same. Something about the way I do my panels always seems off to me, and I never could put my finger on it.
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Bob-owe Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2011
sometimes, having them be the same isn't so bad.
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Emily-Young Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2011  Hobbyist Filmographer
AWW!!! Poor Zappa!!! XD! Well, that looks like something that might happen alright! XD
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AsukaRose Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
lol Asuka hat auch kein Geld außer Ringe :XD:
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Crystal-Dream Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2011  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
mit Ringen kann man eigentlich eher gut im Schmuckgeschäft arbeiten.
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AsukaRose Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
Och du bei der schmilzt doch jedes Metall >__>
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